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Content notice — MATURE

MATURE. Adults only. Every named and speaking character is an adult with an age on the page: Marian Fennessey 45, Roy Fennessey 49, Verity Oyelaran 44, Gareth Lowe 58, Keith Bramwell 61, Audrey Bramwell 66, Hetty Catterick 81, Pam Moxon 54, and Joss Halliday 29. The youngest is 29. No minor appears in any role, memory, photograph, joke, announcement, plan, or future reference. Themes: a rule the whole town says out loud to the people who keep it. The last four clients weighed before anything else happens to them, in ink, in the same hand, never wiped out. A third-generation marriage conducted entirely in pounds, ounces and the sound of a foot on a tiled floor. The measuring as love and the same measuring as the mechanism. A book kept in pencil for twenty-two years and one figure in it that is not a person. A client who died because a list of eleven names and a pharmacy thirty-one miles away are ordinary administration. A surgery with two thousand one hundred and six patients and one doctor who tells you herself what she decided. A crematorium counter that will not stamp a page whose four figures do not run in order. And a certificate for a cremation completed accurately, by hand, for a man who has not died, on a day with no occasion. Sexual content: Marian and Roy are both adults and have been married for twenty-four years. What each of them wants and what stops it is said out loud before anything begins, either may stop it with one word, and one of them does use the word before they start. Both scenes are written in full and are specific to these two people and to what they do for a living. It is not a reward: the competence that makes one of them want the other is the same competence that fills in the weight. No civic choice is gated on it and no ending is unlocked by it. Death and illness: deaths are described from a register, a certificate, a hospital letter, and from what people said to each other afterwards. A chest infection, a delayed diagnosis and a hospital transfer are depicted. No injury is depicted in the making and no method of injury or of drug preparation is described. Prejudice appears as an assumption about a young apprentice and about a woman who runs an office, and is shown only through what people do with it. No slur is written. Nothing supernatural is confirmed at any point in the novel and every character in Brayfold obeys the rule for the whole nine months. Fictional town, trade, surgery, crematorium, and family. All music is instrumental, vocal playback is disabled, and lyrics are empty. No media is generated, fetched, or bundled with this project.

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